In the beginning, there was three men and a sabertooth tiger the three men was called Sundun Sunday and Ryan it started in a cave.
Chapter 1
Over the hill
Hey Ryan and Sundun did you hear that I think it was over the hill?
Do you two want to see what that was or wait for the morning I'm going to sleep me so I might go to sleep, 5 hours later raa what was that ok now I want to go and see what that, are both of yous coming or staying here ok I'm coming me to OK we need to get ready 5 minutes later ok we are over the hill come on Ryan what is that you are holding, I think I know what this is.It’s a camouflage jumper ok come on know we are getting closer to that noises.
Chapter 2
Ryan…
Ok I think it's right behind this wall three two one now where is it I don't know Ryan ahhh I think I have found what we wernnnn
e looking for ok keep up to that thing slow and quietly where did that thing gone with Ryan wait can you see that it is another camper lets going to see what he is doing hey do you know what that noise was (no but I have heard that noise all night. There the sun is coming up I can hear Ryan and there is a trail of blood going to the noise.
Chapter 3
Saber Tooth Tiger
Hey, Sundun do you have a GPS if you do can you please give the GPS to me and a knife so we can clear the way for us. If we find what this is we could be rich so listen for that raa noise. Come on we have to follow that blood trail hey are you guys ok.
Hey I can hear it we are getting closer guys I think it is right behind this bush we are going to go in three two one come on guys let's get that thing OMG it is a saber tooth tiger run we gotta get out of this place before that tiger it’s going to eat us ahh come on Sundun you going to die from that sabre tooth tiger wait I could distract the sabre tooth tiger with fire can you please get some leafs and a stick I'm going to create a fire on a stick. The fire will scare the sabre tooth tiger away.
Chapter 4
The End of…
Ok, we got the fire on the stick lets quickly run to the sabertooth and we can keep the tiger or kill it Sundun. We should keep it for a pet we get rich with this monster we can have flash ass stuff and if we did kill it there could have been another sabertooth tiger and they can breed and we can keep the sabre tooth tiger safe from hunter come let head back and get our stuff to get this sabre tooth tiger later we got the tiger and we got to show the world this animal it could be the only one but don't know.
Wednesday, 5 December 2018
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Hi Tukotahi, well done on getting your story finished! I did find it quite hard to read though. Next time try using speech marks (") to show when someone is speaking.
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